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Submitted by drummerdude1243 last January 25th 2007, 12:01 PM Chad was the hottest guy on our swim team. I loved watching him change in the locker room. He had an amazing body and big bulge in his speedo. In comparison, I come second to his.
Today, I had to stay after and swin laps for screwing around during warm ups. After a half hour of laps, I went into the locker room to shower. To my pleasure, Chad was still there. For some odd reason, he always stayed after in the locker room. I didn't mind him being there.
We each said hi as I walked past him. Once I got to my locker, I watched him out of the corner of my eye. He took off his speedo and out came a 7 inch heaven. It was beautiful with little hair on it. I watched him walk down the row of lockers and around the corner. I loved staring at his ass.
I quickly took of my speedo and hurried to the showers. By the time I got there, he was already soaping his dick. I watched. He looked over at me and I quickly hurried to the next stall and shut the curtain. I turned on the water and let it warm up. My cock was semi hard from looking at him.
After a few seconds of letting the water warm up, my curtain opened and I felt someone press up againist me. I turned around and was face to face with Chad. He instantly grabbe me and embrace in a passionate kiss. As we kissed he rubbed his cock up against mine. By now, we both had full hard ons.
He released my lips and began kissing my neck and then my nipples. I felt his hand caress by balls and cock. He moved down further and licked the head of my dick. He then took all of my cock into his mouth. It felt soo good to feel his lips running along my shaft.
He stoped sucking and got down on all fours and told me to fuck his hole. Without objection I spit on my fingers and lubbed his hole with it. I slowly put my dick in his ass. He moaned with pleasure. I increased my speed untill I had came in his ass. It dripped out and onto my cock. He turned around and licked it off my dick.
At this point, we ran out of time so I quickly sucked him off and let him cum in my mouth. We both got dressed quickly and exchanged #s to do this again.
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 pearl | | I like short hot stories like these |
| helloindia4 | | written as an essay...so boring no exitement |
 alabasterarchangel | | Everything was going great (hot, mysterious, etc.) until I read the last paragraph. It's so anticlimatic - what happened? |
 russiebear | | very unbelievable but in light of that is prolly what makes it otter |
| Dav | | Loved your story which prompted thoughts of why showers/water are linked to my sexual awakening. Up to fifth year in boarding school we washed in open showers with an imposed tradition of wearing togs and the associated un/dressing with towel. The inevitable glimpse of ass/penis made it something hidden and mysterious, perhaps the restriction of washing my crutch and arse gave me a thing about snug fitting underwear and the hiddenness of other guys genitalia gave them a repressed sense of allure, just as the sight of girl in one piece black bathing suit on a beach of topless women was more appealing to me. So I think I do have a fetish with crutch hugging pouches and so to the feel of a soapy hand front and back. And just now I remember being send to the dean for ‘messing’ in the showers and he caned me on the arse, the sting sharper because of wearing pyjamas. And the flick of a towel on my bare bottom by messer with a beautiful long dangling penis. God this is strange writing about this stuff for the first time. Then in the final year we showered in titles cubicles without togs and one was more open in front of the other guys, but still the previous years had established a pattern. So when you wrote about sucking off that guy my secret wish was to be back in those college showers and away from the prefects engaged in mutual soaping- front and back in and out of our togs- our white cotton undies, sucking one of those perfect pricks, having my cock sucked and sucking off another describe albeit it a littlle clinicically. Anyway thanks Drummer Dude- I'm off to the local pool. |
| vaughnflood | | I for one wish you'd have written more, I was into it. Critic wise, unless your a journalist (no.odds were,me either) or aspire be Stienbeck or Whitman, just keep writing. Structure is more important than punk-suation and spelling. Good luck. |
| footboy68 | | It was a great story. It seemed the ending was cut short though. |
| Metal Angel | | Even though the plot is way overused nowadays...we never get tired of those two smoulderingly hot studs in a gym. You write very nicely, direct and unabridged with your descriptions. Keep writing...and consider adding an ending to your stories with a little more "oomph" to it. ;) |
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